Chapter 3

I don’t exactly remember how many things I broke that afternoon. All I know is, it was a lot! I remember my brother pulling me off Ms. Landa and me shouting, “YOU ARE JUST TAKING HER SIDE BECAUSE YOU LIKE HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” “I hate, hate, hate! Both of you!”.

I am sure there was shock on their faces but I don’t remember seeing anything but anger. Anger overwhelmed me and I wanted to kill everything in my path. My brother took me to my room and locked the door. When he came back the room was a mess!

I was calmer then though and my brother asked how I was doing. Was I ok? Did I need something to drink? I answered yes to a drink. I needed some water before I died of dehydration I thought. My brother came back with the water and I drank it all down really fast. I was really thirsty from yelling and crying!

I asked my brother what now? Where would I go? He answered,

“Well Suze, you may not like this but remember Aunt Susan?”

Did I ever! She was quiet, shy, and really pretty. Also, She was Mom’s twin! And I mean IDENTICAL twin sister! They were very close and I had the same name as her. I never actually liked her though. She would never play with me, and she was always correcting me when I did something bad. She was never mean or anything but she just rubbed me the wrong way.

notice my little helper?

I answered him that I did. So he replied,

“Well since she is the only living relation that is capable, you are going to go live with her”

I was shocked! I did not want to live with her! “Can’t you take care of me?” I asked.

“No, I’m sorry Suze but I can’t. I am really busy with my classes and you would just be bored all the time”

“Please! Please!” I asked earnestly.

“I am sorry, but you are leaving in 2 days to go live with her in America.”

I can’t say how sorry I was that he was not going to take care of me. I was also not happy that I was going to America to live with my Fashion Model Aunt! Could this week get any worse?




I am sorry I have not written another chapter in a while. I have been pretty busy. I will be writing one or two a week. So stay tuned for the next one.

Please tell me what you like and don’t like about the story. I love feedback. Should I finish it?

Published by Corrie.S.P.

The story of Corrie is a strange and fantastic tale told over many generations. It mostly starts with Scripture, books, friends, and fun. But, it has been know to include crochet, cooking, baking, drawing, and organization. Corrie, is a strange beast and likes to dwell in shadows observing life and reading mysteries. She plays with animals and has a few close friends. Jesus Christ died for her sins and she will willingly talk to anyone about the Scriptures. If you wish to seek her friendship you must be honest, friendly, true, faithful, charitable, compassionate, and kind. No ordinary person can win the trust of the Corrie. Explore a little bit of her mind on her blogs, she enjoys getting comments on her posts. It means a lot to her. It means that someone took the time to pay attention and read her post and that is an awesome thing! And remember, tread carefully, for Corrie is always watching.

13 thoughts on “Chapter 3

  1. heyy this was good. I know that I am probably super annoying to you but we are leaving somewhere soon and I need to know what the next art contest is so I can enter before tomorrow


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